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| Platypodge14 |
Capo

Joined: 04 Apr 2009 Posts: 1907 Location: Burn City
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:26 am Post subject: |
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wake up low///
go to bed high///
Lather Rinse Repeat keep it going till i die///
you know the best is doin it these words will tell you why///
Platypodge is the best to do it when he hits reply///
but there more to me then a boastful guy///
I struggle too like most people///
I too see lots of evil///
and i face adversity///
to keep on doin what i love///
though as long as i beleive i am above///
the heavens, Gods my lyrical presence///
so when i'm on stage i gain attention///
so salute me when i express my contention///
with this life that i live///
already givin 100% so how much more can i give/// _________________

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| Drastic |
Soldier

Joined: 02 Dec 2008 Posts: 109
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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look...
Exit wounds wen ma gat spray nigga i'll hurt ya/
Double scope on dat kalasnikov lookin like Urkle/
Gun spree ma gun bleed lead/
One shot fire, three dead/
Gunshot grows like Cha cha chia pets/
Big clips and tips shit ma heat show Cleavage/
Niggas scared, head in dere Butt like G-strings/
Shit.... ma gun does orals/
No morals and like a strainer leave u porous/
Put u in a hole like a Gopher/
Patrick Swaze u nigga U'll need Whoopi Golberg/
U's a pussy nigga u shud geta genda change/
Keep talkin ma Smith and Wessin will finish ya sentences/
coat concealin da Colt, Ma guns bleed nigga I don't/
It's Darstizzy I'm true to da rap/
I lack Euphemisms, explicit lyrics is a Knack/
Drastic!!!!!
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| Indifference |
Made man
Joined: 07 Apr 2003 Posts: 464 Location: Detroit-stationed in vicenza italy
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Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:21 pm Post subject: |
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your tough dawg you talk a lot/flow tarts ur rust til you start to rot/x marks your spot til now your hard n shot/learn to take a hit for u try to block/or save your self and wisely stop/figure out ur failure bitch just connect the dots/or take a chair n stand atop/propose to a rope and tie the knot/so i can knock u off and ur neck can pop/then ill laugh a lot/at ur last gasp of shock/then i ll find the ratio of density of ur back n slabs of rock/wit just a dab of drop/little taste of diff/just enough walk for gangs of lips/ _________________ I am a black man as you are me/
I feel a change coming, i see things others do not see
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Madvillain
Joined: 03 Sep 2002 Posts: 16568 Location: interchangeable and upgradeable
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 3:21 am Post subject: |
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time heals, heals whatever your mind feels
filled with, never you mind...still
once they forget the day to day stress
they say the day started..then he departed
may he stay blessed, he lived a lot
in his short years, we used to smoke pot
drink them beers, used to joke a lot
in your name, for the game they carry on
people are hurting working on staying strong
for you an yours, for you i'll blaze a bong _________________
im da bozz
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| Drastic |
Soldier

Joined: 02 Dec 2008 Posts: 109
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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look...look..
Got dat urge to flo well/
Eyes on dat prise, keep da piece like Nobel/
Cus tings dont always go..ga ga go as it shud/
Give it wood... niggas add fire dats y i keep dat Iron/
Put it in ya mouth jus like a pacifier/
A lil slumber a lil slp and da weaks exploited/
So I keep an eye open like a pirate I'm Arrgh rate/(Irate)
Nuttin but Congo shakes on my waist/
Rattle dat shit and I make ya body gyrate/
Like da climate ma temper change/
I'm in da limelight, center stage/
y, cus I'm a mental case/
spray da llama and leave ya white shirt a gentle Beige/
Illest as i demonstrate, each Bars squirt like a lemon wedge/
Go hard on and off/
vocals are loco once heard all fall in love/
Drastic
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| Indifference |
Made man
Joined: 07 Apr 2003 Posts: 464 Location: Detroit-stationed in vicenza italy
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Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 9:43 pm Post subject: |
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writin rap sucks, attracts bitch ass niggas/
wit piss poor lyrics/
whom r alive for GOD knows reasons/
hope ur brakes fail easily, as u press them tightly/
on road conditions of icy/
above speeds of ninety/
with opposing traffic blinding with high beams/
as u argue wit ur bitch so yall die fighting/
what u expect, two inches would give any girl a pipe dream/
you know what it might be, im rancide and hateful/
cuz rap became nothing else but glamorous n playful/
twisted n mangled, nas n jada left forgotten n dangled/
above hip hop archives by a handfull sewn into legends hardline/
this has been a message brought by my rhymes/
all rights reserved to be an asshole kiss mine _________________ I am a black man as you are me/
I feel a change coming, i see things others do not see
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| Drastic |
Soldier

Joined: 02 Dec 2008 Posts: 109
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 3:41 pm Post subject: |
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i'm chirpin rhymes/
Spittin crack raps...Did i do dat? like Urkel lines/
Neva been fuc#ed I'm from da Virgin islands/
Mind on over drive no engine oil/
Fatherin da game like its an infant child/
Razor raps cuttin up tracks nigga gaze at class/
Lyrical liqour I'm overdosed on da Ivanoff/
Nigga ya not on ma level, I'm d a freshes/
Cop ma rocks directly from da dredges/
i'm a Cuban cigar u jus benson and Hedges/
Ma mind ooze lyrical plethora/
Dey try to bottle my aura/
And sell it as a prescription drugs ova da counter/
To cure Hip hops horrid aroma/
Nigga dont try me I'm a soldier/
I keep two arms beside me like a sofa/
Drastic!!
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| kirkanthony |
Soldier
Joined: 08 Oct 2009 Posts: 5
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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 4:26 pm Post subject: |
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i spit it raw when i drop
the grip of the jaw of a croc
like when the law had u locked
constricts as u flip and u flop
twists -rips- and dismembers
i pull up-flipn on bars like the "bartendaz"
youtube the shit if u dont get the refrence
cause im about as average as that shit is
when it come to the rhytmic form of a sentence
artistically inclined
mystically designed
it tickles in my side
your blind from fiction in your mind
MEGALOMANIAC
knocked down a peg by the brainiac
sincerly- i flow from the heart
my style is cardiac
wheredapartyat?
i got ho's to spray bacardi at..
my champ lombardi rap leads the muthafckn PACK!
(i know you like that)
like jacob black...
the werewolf of london on deez niguz
predator survival knack....
penetrate with k-9s
chew with the molars in the back
i tear off the bone
im straight off my throne
battle me?
better be more than straight off the dome
write it down
plan it
revise it
edit
take as long as u like
cuz u still gettin deaded
swung the samurai
he didnt even know he got beheaded
seperated from his spine
couldnt find the backbone to give me credit
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| Drastic |
Soldier

Joined: 02 Dec 2008 Posts: 109
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:01 pm Post subject: |
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Gucci 2 da cuticles/
Sicc aint no cure 4 cold/
Mr Gimme Gimme aint no need for por Fovor/
Iron Bars I spit/
By and Large I'm sicc/
Fly kicks, ma gun speak foreign languages/
No hablar Englais, But sayonara Kid/
Real killa, u neva heard of me?/
Sicc wid da sickle slit ya thraot no Hyperbole/
Plus ma gun knows Fashion turn ya white shirt Burgundy/
DRastic!!
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| KwantomFyzix |
Soldier

Joined: 02 Aug 2009 Posts: 58
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:56 am Post subject: |
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drop heavy, spew hot, get me, not
in the same league, i'm swimmin' 'round you
while you drown in the mainstream
get me shot, and thats only time i'm pop
hard body, crack music like i designed the rock
i'm part of the nation but i ain't signed to roc
so pardon my arrogance, i'm led by my heart, i jus
wear this skin// tear your limbs and distribute your organs anyway//
for tryin' to shyne, i get you deported to your grave//
can't ignore, i'm more than pourin' flames into recorded arrange-ments//
but whats in store bugs me more than the fact Obama won't end the war & change shit!//
i'm on my insane tip, like Clifford Harris in solitary//
put you behind bars like Gucci Mane, they call you buried// burrrr!
BREAKING NEWS, i break it down and break into
a matrix move when i display my amazing hue
that's aura to you,
notorius like christopher wallace but a god in these shoes//
walk with me, i've paved my own lane & ride//
while ya'll buggin' on me like i'm the new homepage design// _________________ the best rapper alive!
Your Favorite Rapper's Favorite Lyricist
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Made man
Joined: 07 Apr 2003 Posts: 464 Location: Detroit-stationed in vicenza italy
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:00 am Post subject: |
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you got that different delivery rhyme style im feelin it though
they quick to battle dif and quicker to lose/
n quickest to diss em, my dicks bigger then that, dawg/in fact its bigger then You/outside the box infact i shit on the booth/u wanna spark a change you just considered as loose/and your seldom excuse for rap is just pittiful proof/earn ridicule by means of, say your name, WHO/ lets see how many colors you bruise/how much is left from blows thrown wit magnitude of the moon/they say nobody is guess you the only to perfectly lose/ _________________ I am a black man as you are me/
I feel a change coming, i see things others do not see
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Madvillain
Joined: 03 Sep 2002 Posts: 16568 Location: interchangeable and upgradeable
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Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:31 pm Post subject: |
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teflon-weapon my reps gone ya dead wrong
head strong antics cram this with death songs
disaster strikes after christ after this
pasture sits a greener field marked for spits
ear marked for this, hear spark the fifth
you here... well hell i'll spark the fifth
ask this kid, the bastard is hardly miffed
arsonist scarred from what the terrorists did
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im da bozz
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| TheFallenAngel |
Soldier
Joined: 03 Jan 2009 Posts: 178
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 12:19 am Post subject: |
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sixteen bars is six pristine wars on mars
chores only go so far, and so far people think im different, so mars
i am what i am, whatever you want me to be
i'll be that too you, but your jugdements stiffer than statue
fix your perceptions and see another reason for reflectin
look deep into your past bitch, now let me sew in the last stitch, fagg-it
you think you have it bad, shit i been covered waist deep in turds
before you laugh just know i transfer this stress into a mess of verbs
im the only one that should bless these words
everytime you pump your chest its absurd
12 guage to ya chest now your the best meal for a bird
rest in peace and be concealed behind the lies of your word
your so unlucky your the only one to die in a herd
while every night i fly high so im cured
i try to decrease the chance of my demise
but you cant hide all these lies, so heres the truth
im the one fresher than all these guys in this booth
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| Drastic |
Soldier

Joined: 02 Dec 2008 Posts: 109
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:15 pm Post subject: |
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Look..
Gold watch, Kenneth cole Belt Buckle holdin up ma Old Glock/
Kicks so tite it look like it had Botox/
Mr Gaudy is Back, Bask in ma Aura/
Stunt so much I got Attention Surplus Disorder/
Highrolla, fuckin premolar flosser/
Money old as shit, fuck... prehistoric fossils/
Y envy cus all i wear is trendy/
No bumber sticker bitch silk smooth Fendis/
Rocky wrist appraise dat shit, how much dat cost?/
Got a fuckin carrot nose ya boy is Jack Frost/
Bitches lust, can u Blame em/
Prada suit so well cut it jus mite maim em/
So fly like dat so Raven/
A lister, so windows 8 u so Vista/
Swag ship? I'm on it bitch n I'm Captin/
White Gold on ma neck swingin like Ricky Hatton/
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